Essay Sample For College Pdf Textbooks

 Sure, you might know the theory behind what a college essay is supposed to sound and look like. But just like reading a description of the Golden Gate Bridge pales in comparison to seeing it in person, there’s no replacement for seeing actual college essays written by students just like you. Well, almost like you – they’ve since gotten into college.

But where do you find good sources for reading sample college essays? How can you make sure that these resources will actually strengthen and improve your writing? And what is the best way to use the college essay examples that you do find? In this article, I’ll go over the best books and websites for finding essays, I’ll point out a few to avoid, and I’ll explain how to make the most out of other people’s essays while avoiding common pitfalls.


Why Look At College Essay Examples?

There are some very good reasons for wanting to check out how other people have handled the college admissions essay.

First, because you'll be able to get a better sense of what colleges are looking for, you will necessarily broaden your own topic brainstorming past your first, easiest, and most clichéd ideas. It's one thing to hear that a completely mundane topic is way better than one focusing on your greatest sports moment. But once you see other students writing about a family meal, or an obsession with a particular board game, or a love of cultivating cacti, you'll be convinced to find your essay in the small moments of your life.

Second, you'll see how your life and writing compares to that of your peers. The great diversity of voices, topics, tones, points of view will show you just how many things you could possibly write about, and how to keep the essay connected to your personality and your voice.

Finally, if you really do have a good story to tell about something that gets written about a lot, like divorce, pet death, a community service trip, or winning the big game, you can get ideas for how to approach a potentially lackluster essay topic in a novel and striking way.


What Makes A Good Sample College Essay Resource?

First, the basics. A source is only as good as its content, so make sure you're reading college essays that worked, from people who actually got into the schools they applied to. Also, it's best to focus on new essays (not older than 10-15 years), so you are reading what has worked in the most recent past, rather than seeing outdated ideas and historical perspectives.

Next, what you really want is diversity in voice and perspective. Make sure the essays featured come from many different kinds of students: either from applicants to both top and lower-tier schools; or from students with different ethnic, economic, and racial backgrounds; or from writers using both formal and more experimental essay techniques.

Finally, the best sources of admission essays will feature explanatory material. This will give each essay some kind of context: commentary on what makes the essay good, explanations of the drafting process, or, at least, biographical information about students. Without commentary or context, it’s hard to know what you’re supposed to learn from the essays you read.


Looking at a bunch of identical koi isn't the best way to learn about freshwater fish varieties.


Where to Find Great College Essay Examples

Here are my recommendations for excellent resources, as well as some warnings about resources that I think you should avoid. 


College Essays Collected in Books

I've taken a look at many of the books that collect college essays, so here are my recommendations. I've divided them into three categories:

  • Excellent – meaning having really diverse essays or very helpful commentary on each essay, or both
  • Worthwhile – meaning either a helpful collection of essays without a lot of context or commentary, or some great advice but a narrow selection of essays geared toward one particular type of school
  • Don't Bother – not useful either as a source of college essays or as a source of essay-writing advice and explanations

Also, please note that although I’ve listed the Amazon prices for all the books, you should definitely check your school and public library for copies before buying them. And even if your library doesn't have a copy, ask them to request one either from another library in the same system or even from the Library of Congress through interlibrary loan.


Excellent Books

Heavenly Essays: 50 Narrative College Application Essays That Worked 

Written by Janine W. Robinson, who blogs about college essays at EssayHell, this book features great sample essays. But it's Robinson's precise and clear explanations of how to use a narrative style in your essay to tell a story about your life that make the book really outstanding. Through long and detailed commentary on each essay, Robinson shows why narrative is exactly the kind of structure that works best for personal essays. You can check out samplesections from the book on her blog. The book retails for $10 new on Amazon.


On Writing the College Application Essay, 25th Anniversary Edition: The Key to Acceptance at the College of Your Choice

Harry Bauld used to be an admissions officer at Brown, so he certainly knows what he is talking about when he writes about how and why to avoid clichés and explains how to find and keep your specific voice. Bauld demonstrates his points with sample essays, showing how they go from first to final draft. The book is easy to read, uses humor to make points, and his advice will carry over into your college writing as well. It is $12.50 new on Amazon, but there are much cheaper used copies available there as well.


The Berkeley Book of College Essays: Personal Statements for California Universities and Other Select Schools

This compilation features college admissions essays written by seniors from Berkeley High School (which is not affiliated with UC Berkeley). Because the city of Berkeley is economically, racially, and ethnically very diverse, these essays are about many different interests, perspectives, and experiences, and are written in many different styles and tones. Although there is no commentary for the essays, this collection is a great way to get a sense of the broad array of essay possibilities.

Also, because many of the students from Berkeley High apply to UC schools, this collection separates out UC application essay packages. (If you are interested in UC, also check out our own guide to writing excellent UC essays!) This book is currently $15 on Amazon. 


50 Successful Harvard Application Essays: What Worked for Them Can Help You Get into the College of Your Choice

Edited by the staff of the Harvard Crimson, this is a great collection of essays from a not particularly diverse group of students. It is very useful to see how the very top students approach the college essay, as long as their best effort neither intimidates nor stymies you. The contextual material is excellent, with helpful explanations of what makes each essay work well. This book retails for $12 new on Amazon, with much cheaper used copies also available.


Worthwhile Books

College Essays That Made a Difference, 6th Edition

This Princeton Review guide is mostly distinguished by its introductory material, which has detailed interviews with many different colleges at many different tiers about what role essays play in college applications, what kind of mistakes are okay, and what to write and not to write about. The sample essays themselves come without commentary, but each features a very short bio of the student, including test scores, GPA, a list of colleges where the person applied, and a list of colleges where the person got in. Right now, it's $11.50 new on Amazon, but there are cheaper used copies as well.


50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays

This collection of of college essays that worked, edited by Gen and Kelly Tanabe, has somewhat spare, but insightful, commentary explaining what each essay does well and what it could have done better. It also includes an interview with an admissions officer explaining how essays are used in admissions decisions and some comments from students about the writing process. The link above is to a downloadable PDF file.


50 Successful Stanford Application Essays: Get into Stanford and Other Top Colleges 

If you like the Tanabes' approach (they are the authors of the previous book), then you will find this one useful as well. The narrow diversity of essay content and the style of commentary (thoughtful, but not particularly detailed or expansive) is very similar. It's priced at $13.25 new on Amazon with some used options as well.


Fiske Real College Essays That Work 

The "Fiske" of the title is Edward Fiske, who used to be the Education editor of the NY Times, and who therefore has some experience with what colleges want from their applicants. The book itself features an introduction with some helpful essay-writing tips, a diverse selection of essays built around narrative, but unfortunately has very little commentary to go with each essay. It retails for $12.50 new on Amazon, with cheaper used options available.


2015 Elite College Application Essays

Although there's almost no commentary or discussion of what makes these essays work, this book is a reasonably good collection of essays from students who are now enrolled at Ivy and other top-tier schools. What's particularly appealing about this college essay compilation is how very new these essays are: all are from students who became freshmen in 2015. The book is $14 new on Amazon.


Don't Bother

100 Successful College Application Essays

I'd recommend not spending your time on any of the editions of this collection. The essays are decades old in some cases, the topics are clichéd and boring, and there is little to no commentary to make any of them useful. 


College Essays Published Online

I'll split my recommendations here into "worthwhile" and "don't bother" categories. There aren't any truly great collections of sample college essays online.



Individual College Websites. There are many essays published online by the various colleges where these students now go. This means these essays are guaranteed to be real, authentic, and to have worked on someone's application. Some of the essays even come with brief commentary by admissions officers about what makes them great. (The link will take you to our list of over 130 essays from more than 15 different colleges.)

Teen Ink Magazine. Teen Ink publishes all sorts of writing by teens, including college admission essays, which are split off into their own section on the site. The essays necessary feature a wide range of experiences and perspectives, so this is a great place to get a broad sense of what other students are writing about. The essays don't have any context except comment sections that run the gamut from generic “this is good” comments to some insight. Readers also get a chance to vote on which essays are featured as #1, #2, etc., which may be misleading because readers of Teen Ink aren't admissions officers.


Don't Bother 

Watch out for paid websites like AdmitSee, CollegeMapper, and Acceptional, which claim to give you access to college essays for a monthly or fixed fee. Because of the paywall, there's no way to verify the quality of the essays these sites have. Also, there are enough books that you could borrow from your library that you don’t need to pay monthly fees to these places. Finally, I would particularly stay away from AdmidSee, which uses Amazon reviews for other essay resources as a marketing platform.


Frogs piggybacking on each other? Super cute. A company piggybacking its advertising onto book reviews? Really not cute at all.


The Best Ways To Use College Admission Essay Samples

So now that you've rounded up a bunch of sample college essays, what should you do with them? Here are some tips for your next steps.


When Should You Read Essay Examples?

I'd advise waiting until after you've done some brainstorming of your own before you start immersing yourself in other people's work and ideas. (If you're not sure how to brainstorm, check out our guide to coming up with great college essay topics.)

This way, you can use other people’s essays to think about different possibilities for writing about your own topic. For example, looking at how other people tackled their life experience can show you:

  • how to focus on a different detail in your own story
  • how to change the insight you want to draw from your story
  • how to think about different ways to start and end your narrative


What Can Good College Essays Teach You?

There are both broad and specific learning opportunities to be found in reading other people's work.

Broadly speaking, seeing how other people are approaching the problem of writing a college essay can jog your own creative process. Likewise, reading a diversity of thoughts and voices will show you that even the most normal and boring seeming experiences be made into riveting essays.

More specifically, if you find essays from applicants to your target school, you can get some sense of the level of sophistication they expect to see from your writing. 

Finally, good context and commentary on the essays can show you how they are put together and what makes them work. You can then put this advice to use when rewriting your essay later.


Pitfalls To Avoid

Of course, being surrounded by other people's work, especially when some of that work is much better than what you think you can manage, has its share of temptations. So what do you need to guard against when looking at sample essays?

Plagiarism. This one is basic and obvious. Do not copy these sample essays! Admissions officers have seen them all, read them all, memorized them all – you will not get away with it.

Copying and mimicry. Think of this as a softer kind of plagiarism. Even if you really like someone else’s style, don’t borrow it. Even if someone’s life sounds more exciting than yours, don’t steal a piece of it for your own essay. Why? Because if you don’t sound like yourself, it will be visible to an experienced reader (and guess what, admissions officers are very experienced readers). Also, if you’re writing about experiences that aren't yours, your unfamiliarity will show through the lack of believable details.


Let this hand-in-the-alligator's-mouth image pop up in your brain every time you think about stealing someone else's work.


Resources for Essay Writing Advice

In researching this article, I came across books and websites that don't necessarily feature a lot of sample essays, but that give really excellent advice on writing your own college essay. I strongly recommend you spend some time checking them out.

Essay Hell blog. This great resource is written by Janine Anderson Robinson, an English teacher and a journalist, whose book Heavenly Essays I recommended above. The blog posts feature lots and lots of well-explained, detailed, easy to understand advice about how to write your essay, and are broken down into easy to understand, bite-sized nuggets of usefulness.

Slate's Getting In podcast. The entire series is an interesting look at the college application process, with useful tips and explanations about all aspects what seniors are going through. Check out Episode 2: The Essay, in which a student gets feedback in real time on their essay from a former Princeton director of admissions and a panel of experts talk about essay dos and don’ts. The episode is 26 minutes long.


The College Essay Trap: Rescue Your College Application Essay From the "Maybe" Pile

This is incredibly concise and excellent explanation of what not to do and what to avoid when writing your personal statement. It's short, sweet, to the point, and is praised to the skies by legendary Princeton admissions dean Fred Hargadon. Currently $12 new on Amazon.


The Bottom Line

  • Look at college essay examples to broaden your own topic brainstorming and get ideas for fixing lackluster topics.
  • Look for resources with diverse and recent essays, from many different kinds of students and with explanatory material that explains what makes each essay good.
  • Look at essay samples after you’ve generated some of your own ideas to think about different possibilities for writing about your own topic.
  • Seeing how other people are approaching the problem of writing a college essay can jog your creative process.
  • Avoid both actual plagiarism and “borrowing”: don’t use someone else’s style, voice, or life experiences as your own.


What’s Next?

If you’re starting to work on college essays, check out our article laying out every single kind of essay prompt out there and a step by step guide to writing a great college essay.

Are you working on the Common App essay? Read our breakdown of the Common App prompts and our guide to picking the best prompt for you.

Or maybe you're interested in the University of California? Check out our complete guide to the UC personal statements.

Working on other pieces of your college applications? We’ve got guides to choosing the right college for you, writing about extracurriculars, and requesting teacher recommendations.

Thinking about taking the SAT one last time, or prepping for your first run at it? Read our ultimate guide to studying for the SAT and make sure you're as prepared as possible.


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The Reviews


English & Composition

Viewed freely, the English language is the accretion and growth of every dialect, race, and range of time, and is both the free and compacted composition of all. -Walt Whitman

Textbook: Exploring Perspectives: A Concise Guide to Analysis

Author: Randall Fallows
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Sarah Zale, Associate Faculty, Shoreline Community College

 Reviewer's Comments
This textbook is recommended for Community College level composition classes. The main reason is its pedagogical perspective that writing is a recursive rather than linear process, an act of discovery with a thesis that evolves and expands in complexity. Fallows balances the merits of academic inquiry, which requires the vetting of sources and their authors, with the style of the personal essay, encouraging personal reflection with use of “I” and analysis of personal biases. While giving attention to reflection, critical thinking, discovery, development, and revision of an analytical essay, Fallows also helps the student with basic writing skills such as diction, syntax variety, and sentence combining

Textbook: Frameworks for Academic Writing

Author: Steven Poulter
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Melissa Warren, Full-time Faculty, University of Phoenix
Review Date: December, 2016
Full review

Reviewer's Comments
I absolutely recommend this book. The textbook is a guide for a writing workshop in which students complete the exercises from the book in their teacher’s presence so the instructor can coach the students through each exercise. The author hypothesizes that English teachers see writing in a holistic manner and students see writing in a linear manner, and the exercises and tutorials in this book bridge the gap between the way teachers see writing and the way students see writing. The scaffolding provided in this book is perfect for novice and advanced writers alike. The prompts are remarkably open ended and usefully for essay writing for any academic discipline.

Textbook: Methods of Discovery: A Guide to Research Writing

Author: Pavel Zemliansky, Ph.D
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Marc Barnhill - Lecturer, New York University; The City University of New YorkK/span>

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0 Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this book. Overall, the book is well thought-out and usefully organized, with a highly readable and engaging presentation and carefully chosen examples to introduce and illustrate concepts. The book presents a very accurate account of the nature of research writing that is highly consistent with the needs of freshman writers and the demands of research projects.

Textbook: Online Technical Writing

Author: David A. McMurrey
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Marie Highby - Senior Technical Editor, Synopsys, Inc.

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this online text as the required primary textbook for community college students who plan to major in technical subjects or technical writing.  Having this textbook online is a major resource. This text's content is so similar to most of the leading technical writing textbooks that it can easily be used as a substitute for one of them.  Strengths include the range of examples, easy-to-read style, modularity, and the detailed nature of its instructional content.

Textbook: The Process of Research Writing

Author: Steven D. Krause
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Reviewer: David Cole, Publisher, Bay Tree Publishing

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
This book thoroughly introduces the methods, tools, and process of writing a research paper. It presents concepts systematically and clearly with models and examples. Students are well served by working through this book from beginning to end and doing the exercises. Instructors who want to provide their own exercises and/or examples may customize the text. However, because this book adopts a process-oriented approach, students with divergent learning styles may find the text hard to use.

Textbook: The Process of Research Writing

Author: Steven D. Krause
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Christine Sibley, Technology Librarian - Faculty, Ohlone Community College District

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this book for community college students, trade schools, vocational schools, and remedial students that are required to perform academic writing and research. This text shows strength in the teaching of the academic research writing processes, and is an instrumental tool that would improve and create an understanding for community college level academic writing and research. The author's teaching approach is energetic and the exercises are nice reinforcements of the theories and curriculum being taught. The text PDF version, the one reviewed, is visually appealing and easy to read.

Textbook: Rhetoric and Composition: A Guide for the College Writer

Author: Barton, et. al.
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Mark Barnhill, Lecturer, New York University

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this book. The reading level is entirely appropriate to first-year or even remedial community college students; neither overly challenging nor simplistic, and adequate contextual clues are provided for potentially unfamiliar vocabulary and references. The textbook is a remarkably clear and understandable overview of the various aspects of the writing process, and is notably good at explaining to students the conventions and expectations of the academic world regarding writing and revision.

Textbook: Style for Students Online: Effective Technical Writing in the Information Age (2009)

Author: Joe Schall
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Alena Hairston, MFA, English Professor, Solano Community College

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this textbook. Overall, the text is smoothly formatted and concisely comprehensive, including the author's "Sins of the Pen," a postscript of sorts at the end of the text wherein the author with much wit discusses the writing and learning process. The manual offers depth in terms of concepts and issues covered while keeping the material manageable. Outside resources are often varied, relevant, useful. Science and math majors will greatly benefit from the text. In addition, there are very useful modules on professional etiquette.

Textbook: Style for Students Online: Effective Technical Writing in the Information Age

Author: Joe Schall
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Joy Zhao, Ph.D., Professor of English, El Camino College

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this book. It has a comprehensive coverage of English and writing for various disciplines. Its language is plain, non-technical, and easy to follow. Almost every part of its 10 chapters contains helpful academic and professional links or downloadable files for "Self Study," which is highly useful for teaching as well. It provides smooth navigation and flexible organization, both of which make it easy for any instructor to select what is needed and adapt. I also recommend this e-book for its open and generous spirit, which has a motivating and nurturing effect on (student) readers.

Textbook: Three Modules on Clear Writing Style: An Introduction to the Craft of Argument

Author: Joseph M. Williams and Gregory Colomb
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Alena Hairston, MFA, English Professor, Solano Community College

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I recommend this textbook. The overall content is very good. It is most appropriate for college-level technical disciplines such as sciences and math. Instructors can re-purpose content for less technical areas, as well as supplement this material with writing instruction germane to humanities and social sciences. It has a strong technical-writing focus and modules emphasize problem-solution writing. Prose is concise yet effective.

Textbook: Writing Skills for Business English: Training for NGO Staff

Author: Commonwealth of Learning
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Frances Lord, Adjunct Instructor of English, Lake Tahoe Community College

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
I would recommend this open textbook for a remedial English composition class or as an introduction to business writing. Bits and pieces could be used in a first year community college composition course for English, communications, and business students. For a remedial composition class or an introduction to business writing course, this could be used as a required primary textbook. Because the text was created in India, the spelling is British English, which could throw some students off. In addition, a few sections are very specifically written for people writing community relation pieces or proposals for funding.

Textbook: Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing Volume 1

Author: Edited by Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Frances Lord, Adjunct English Instructor, Lake Tahoe Community College

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
This text is designed for and would be extremely helpful to first year community college writing students. It is possible to integrate chapters into any writing course. The text discusses a nice variety of topics related to many aspects of the writing process. The tone of the chapters is casual and the writing is directed towards the student with various contemporary examples. It would be fantastic to have the text be a required supplementary text. As it is free, it would be completely appropriate for it to be required.

Textbook: Writing Spaces: Readings on Writings, Volume 2

Author(s): Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky, eds.
Textbook URL:
Reviewer: Amie Seidman, Assistant Professor of English, Bainbridge College
Review Date: December 2011

*Average of all chapters. Maximum rating is 5.0.Reviewer's Comments
This book is recommended for first-year composition courses at either four-year or two-year colleges. It is appropriate for any major program, as most students are required to take an entry-level English class. The book is a collection of 21 essays by various authors, spanning a variety of topics related to writing. It is well organized, ranging from very broad to very specific. The editors have done a nice job grouping similar topics together, and the TOC makes this clear. One could use this as the sole or primary text for a course; it provides useful information on rhetorical analysis as well as basic formatting information. However, since the chapters are all stand-alone essays, it would also be appropriate to extract specific essays as a supplementary reference.

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